Saturday, July 19, 2014

Fence Jumpers: Part 15

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  1. Very nice conclusion. And by that I mean you've finally gotten me angry at Horatio. B) Good job!

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    1. Thank you! ^_^ Ha, I take this accomplishment with great pride. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed! :D

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  2. I'd like to know more about Skyler's family, and also about Claire's background. And about the city they're in.

    I'm looking forward to the next season. :D

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    1. Ooh, those would be interesting. :D

      It'll be a good one. ;)

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  3. Wow! Nice ending to season one. Very well crafted story.

    An obvious choice that came to mind at the very end of this was to cut the tracker out of Grace (it was bulging so it wouldn't be a huge cut) so she wouldn't have to stay on the train...Yup, you can tell I'm a guy 'cause I thought of that. ;D

    But anyway I really, really, really like this. A lot. XD

    Areth,
    Karthmin

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    1. Thank you! ^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed!

      Ah. XD That's true... I don't know if any of them had any of the necessary tools for it, though... but that's an interesting point. B)

      I'm glad you like it. ^_^ Thank you for reading! :D

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